My IOC recording would not upload, sorry guys. I know you were all really excited to hear what sounds like a small child speaking random words about Macbeth in a desperate, nervous attempt at analysis.
MY PASSAGE: characterizing Mac(bae)th and Banqu(yo)
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That trusted home
Might yet enkindle you unto the crown,
Besides the thane of Cawdor. But 'tis strange:
And oftentimes, to win us to our harm,
The instruments of darkness tell us truths,
Win us with honest trifles, to betray's
In deepest consequence.
Cousins, a word, I pray you.
[Aside] Two truths are told,
As happy prologues to the swelling act
Of the imperial theme.--I thank you, gentlemen.
Aside
Cannot be ill, cannot be good: if ill,
Why hath it given me earnest of success,
Commencing in a truth? I am thane of Cawdor:
If good, why do I yield to that suggestion
Whose horrid image doth unfix my hair
And make my seated heart knock at my ribs,
Against the use of nature? Present fears
Are less than horrible imaginings:
My thought, whose murder yet is but fantastical,
Shakes so my single state of man that function
Is smother'd in surmise, and nothing is
But what is not.
Look, how our partner's rapt.
[Aside] If chance will have me king, why, chance may crown me,
Without my stir.
New horrors come upon him,
Like our strange garments, cleave not to their mould
But with the aid of use.
[Aside] Come what come may,
Time and the hour runs through the roughest day.
Worthy Macbeth, we stay upon your leisure.
Give me your favour: my dull brain was wrought
With things forgotten. Kind gentlemen, your pains
Are register'd where every day I turn
The leaf to read them. Let us toward the king.
Think upon what hath chanced, and, at more time,
The interim having weigh'd it, let us speak
Our free hearts each to other.
Very gladly.
Till then, enough. Come, friends.*********************************************************************************
I give myself a 5. I showed adequate knowledge of the text as a whole by providing background information about Macbeth and putting the passage in context, and supported most comments with at least some reference to the text, whether plot or specific quote.
Criterion B: Understanding of the use and effects of literary features
I give myself a 5. I used examples of stylistic features and literary devices in my commentary and provided evidence of some understanding of their effect/purpose.
Criterion C: Organization
I give myself a 2. I attempted to stay on track with what I had prepared but my structure was not always well organized/was sometimes repetitive.
Criterion D: Language
I give myself a 3. I used proper literary language, but overall it was an informal commentary.

